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Writing Task 2: ‘family history’ topic.
In some parts of the
world it is becoming popular to research the
history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive
or negative development?
Note:
I would call this a “2-part question”. The task is
NOT to write an essay about the positives and negatives of researching family
history. The task is to explain why people do it, and then give your opinion as
to whether it is a positive OR negative thing to do.
Tip:
Why not do some research on the Internet around the
topic of “family history”? Try to find some good words and phrases that English
speakers use when writing about this topic e.g. family tree, ancestors,
genealogy, tracing family history, a person’s roots etc.
Essay Plan - 10 minutes
Paragraph 1: Just write 2 sentences
- introduce the topic
- give an overall answer to both questions
Paragraph 2: Why might people want to research family history?
- various different reasons
- to know more about themselves and their roots,
where they come from, whether their
ancestors had similar personality traits
- because the Internet makes it easier to do this
research, we hear about others who have
done it, there are even advertisements to encourage
us
- out of curiosity e.g. we might secretly hope that
we have a famous or wealthy ancestor
Paragraph 3: Is it positive or negative?
- positive in my view
- a fascinating hobby, a nice way to spend free
time, a good talking point with family and
friends e.g. if we discover a particularly
interesting ancestor
- a good way to teach children about history, how
earlier generations lived
- we may even find “long-lost” family members,
distant relatives that we might have the
chance to meet
Paragraph 4:
- conclude by repeating (paraphrasing) the overall
answer to both questions
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